Well, it looks better than before, but I'm curious what other chain guards you've got to work with. I think that chain guard would look perfect on a wingbar, like Verrt showed, but this Silver King isn't as curvy as the wingbar bike. It's made up of mostly straight lines, with few curves. The chain guard you've got is completely curvy. It's cool, but it kind of sticks out too much on this bike. I just don't think it flows with the overall appearance of your Silver King.
Still, this is your bike, not mine. I'm just suggesting what I would do if this bike were mine. Build it the way that makes you happy.