then it will look just like Multipass's bike
Ironically enough, I've been looking at this bike and thinking that I need to do my '67 Schwinn cantilever frame in flat black LOL !!
I like what you've done with this bike Steve, as Clothespin "n" has pointed out, it's clean and simple. Maybe the Bauhaus is exerting subliminal control over your builds
Not really sure about the speedo either. Thinking of taking it off and painting the neck and the headlight bracket flat black.
Maybe swapping the stem for one with less rise and more forward reach would give the look you're after? The tall stem and speedo - IMHO - work against the long, low look of the rest of the bike.
BTW - I need a T-Shirt! I'll be emailing you 'bout that very soon.